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一篇優秀的托福作文,你需要注意哪些語法問題?

在備考托福寫作時,很多考生不是很重視語法,因此寫出來的文章出現了一些基本性的語法錯誤,或者是文章顯得比較生硬,雖然也能讀懂,但是感覺有點彆扭。

托福寫作7大基本語法要求

不要出現的不完整的句子

不要出現分詞短語作狀語的錯誤

不要出現修飾詞錯位

不要出現串句

不要出現時態錯誤

不要出現代詞錯誤

不要出現結構混亂

選擇合適的語法結構可以使句子意思的表達更為精確和簡練。下面,小編為大家介紹在選擇語法結構時可以參考的原則。

一個句子的主語和謂語動詞應該能夠反映句子中的最重要的意思。

例子:

The situation that resulted in my grandfather』s not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.

這句話想表達的重要概念是「grandfather』s not being able to study」,而在表達時,用的主語是situation,謂語動詞是was,不能強調需要表達的重點概念。

可以改為:My grandfather couldn』t study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.

避免頻繁使用「there be」結構。

例子:

There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day.It was hard work for my grandfather.

可以改為:My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.

或者

My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.

把從句改為短語或單詞。

例子:

Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located 100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.

可以改為:

The dairy farm was located in a remote area,100 kilometers to the nearest university.

僅在需要強調賓語而不是主語的時候,才使用被動語態。

例子:

In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather』s family.

本句的重點應該是「忙碌的家庭-my grandfather』sfamily」,而使用了被動語態後,重心似乎變成了cows和hay。

可以改為:In the fall,my grandfather』s family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.

用更為精確的一個動詞來代替動詞短語。

例子:

My grandfather didn』t have time to stand around doing nothing with his school friends.

可以改為:My grandfather didn』t have time to loiter with his school friends.

有時兩句話的信息經過組合完全可以用一句話來簡練地表達。

例子:

Profits from the farm were not large. Sometimes they were too small to meet the expenses of running a farm. They were not sufficient to pay for a university degree.

可以改為:Profits from the farm were sometimes too small to meet operational expenses let alone pay for a university degree.

一篇好的文章是由一個個句子堆砌起來的,每一句話都是這篇文章的重點,萬萬不可忽視。

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